Sunday, 7 June 2009

My Terrain

You walk across my soul
with tender steps
unaware of my terrain
you falter at my heart
where you carve your name
and leave a mark
that we both pretend
not to see


Oriana said...

Eloquent. Perfection. Stabbing. Poignant. Moving.

Susannah said...

Thanks Oriana.

Linda Jenkinson said...

Lovely poem that brings the imagery home and makes the experience personal to every reader.

Susannah said...

Thanks very much Linda for stopping by and leaving a comment. :-)

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