Friday, 11 February 2011

Up In The Air

I am
a flock
of birds
scattered by
a sudden noise.

14 comments:

Mary said...

Susannah, I can REALLY picture this. I also like the shape of the poem!

Susannah said...

Thanks Mary. :-)

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Cool image.One of my fave beaches in Tofino is home to a huge flock of seagulls. You could tell when a storm was coming, they would all huddle in rows, facing the same way. Pup would run along the beach and the entire flock would rise into the air..........Love your poem!

Charles said...

I always like these short poems that have so much impact.

Susannah said...

Sherry, I could just imagine it! :-)

Susannah said...

Thanks Charles. :-)

Willow said...

Wow, Susannah, wonderful, I am there.

Susannah said...

Thanks Willow. :-)

gabriellebryden said...

Love it! I'm a bit like that when my nerves are on edge :)

Susannah said...

Hi gabrielle, great to see you here, thanks for visiting. :-)

Steve Isaak said...

Excellent, stunning work.

Susannah said...

Thanks Steve, it is good to meet you. :-)

turtlememoir said...

Love it, so descriptive... There are times when this 'I am' feels exactly like that. :)

Susannah said...

turtlememoir, thank you. :-)

Good to see you here.

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