Friday, 29 October 2010

Lightcatcher

L I G H T C A T C H E R

Impetuous now
trying to catch the light
audacious arms
outstretched
like
barren branches
coveting
those yellow strands
aching to feel
those
soft ribbons
of warmth
draping
like
Summer

- Susannah Bec 2010

8 comments:

Fireblossom said...

Golldoggit. I KNOW I hit "follow" the last time i was here, but it never showed up on my list, so I've redone it and added this blog to my blogroll at Word Garden using the url this time.

Meanwhile, I love the way you've lit up certain letters to create a streak of light! I adore concrete poetry, but one doesn't see it much, maybe because it's hard to reproduce. Nicely done! :-)

Susannah said...

Thanks very much fireblossom. :-)

I am a real fan of your writing so it is really good to see you here.

Jingle said...

awesome word play...

you are simply outstanding.

starwatcher521 said...

Wonderful image! And I like the graphic design matching the title ...

Susannah said...

Thanks Jingle. :-)

Susannah said...

Starwatcher, thanks very much. :-)

It is good to meet you, thanks for visiting.

Kerry O'Connor said...

This is very beautiful. I love what you did with the colours of the font - a little beam of light falling down your words and illuminating the meaning.

Mike Patrick said...

From the title to the final word, wonderful. I could see the images and feel the sun's warmth. Very special, Susannah.

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