Friday 29 October 2010

Lightcatcher

L I G H T C A T C H E R

Impetuous now
trying to catch the light
audacious arms
outstretched
like
barren branches
coveting
those yellow strands
aching to feel
those
soft ribbons
of warmth
draping
like
Summer

- Susannah Bec 2010

8 comments:

Fireblossom said...

Golldoggit. I KNOW I hit "follow" the last time i was here, but it never showed up on my list, so I've redone it and added this blog to my blogroll at Word Garden using the url this time.

Meanwhile, I love the way you've lit up certain letters to create a streak of light! I adore concrete poetry, but one doesn't see it much, maybe because it's hard to reproduce. Nicely done! :-)

Susannah said...

Thanks very much fireblossom. :-)

I am a real fan of your writing so it is really good to see you here.

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

awesome word play...

you are simply outstanding.

Martin said...

Wonderful image! And I like the graphic design matching the title ...

Susannah said...

Thanks Jingle. :-)

Susannah said...

Starwatcher, thanks very much. :-)

It is good to meet you, thanks for visiting.

Kerry O'Connor said...

This is very beautiful. I love what you did with the colours of the font - a little beam of light falling down your words and illuminating the meaning.

Mike Patrick said...

From the title to the final word, wonderful. I could see the images and feel the sun's warmth. Very special, Susannah.

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