Monday 15 November 2010

All I Need


The soft
blue green
ocean waves
of your eyes
are all the
colour I need
on this stark
greyscale
morning
....

- Susannah Bec 2010

11 comments:

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Bee-you-tee-ful! Really. I love it. Especially "the ocean waves of your eyes". Wow.

Susannah said...

Thanks Sherry. :-)

Anonymous said...

Ah...that's just lovely, Susannah! I too like "the ocean waves of your eyes"...wonderful imagery.

And I realy appreciate your stopping by my page and leaving me anniversary wishes..so kind of you...:)

Lynette

Susannah said...

Thanks Lynette. :-)

It was so lovely to read your wonderful story.

Anonymous said...

welcome to JP....

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if you have a moment, please stop by Jingle Poetry and leave a comment for Robert, showing how you appreciate working at poets united ...
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Happy Wednesday!

Bing Yap said...

"blue green ocean waves of your eyes"... i can drown in them too... i love this brilliant piece!

Susannah said...

Thanks very much Bing. :-)

Anonymous said...

love your blog,
your poetry is simply mind blowing...
keep it up.
blessings fly your way.
xoxx

Anonymous said...

Glad to Land at your fantastic poetry land today,
How are you?

Love your poetry talent, Please join us at Jingle Poetry Monday potluck today,
First time participants can link in 1 to 3 old poems, poems unrelated to our theme are welcome!

Happy Tuesday/Wednesday!
Hope to see you in.
xxx

Natalie Jean Kelsey said...

I love this!

Susannah said...

Thanks Natalie. :-)

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