Saturday, 6 November 2010

Reflections

Those silvered reflections of you

still exist, strands of spidered silk

woven and so delicately knotted

tracing my veins, footpaths edged

beside the crimson rivers, blood

bound and fluid, still guided

by the high wire touch of you

imperceptable tightropes

where once you walked


- Susannah Bec 2010

18 comments:

inspiredleo80 said...

i enjoy reading your beautifully written words. this one made me think of a lover and those thoughts are always sweet. i look forward to reading more.
-inspiredleo :) http://inspiredleo.blogspot.com

Susannah said...

Hi leo, thanks for your kind words. It is good to see you again. :-)

Ladan Madobe said...

This imagery is vivid, i like that this all fits together perfectly. Well done Susannah.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

So beautiful, Susannah! the "spidered silk", "the high wire touch of you".....the remembrance, and beauty and romance......just lovely.

Susannah said...

Thanks Ladan. :-)

Susannah said...

Sherry, thanks very much. :-)

Good to see you.

Fireblossom said...

"the high wore touch of you"

oh yeah.

Susannah said...

Good ro see you Fireblossom. :-)

Charles said...

This piece reminds me of the song "memories" by Barbara Streisand. Like reminiscing about a great love.

Susannah said...

Thanks for dropping in Charles, it's good to see you. :-)

be not blind said...

Wow, really great! The whole perspective of it is amazing. That's kind of what we aim to do isn't it? -To turn things around and round til we see different aspects of life, different ways of explaining and expressing ourselves and our lives. I especially liked:

..by the high wire touch of you

imperceptable tightropes

where once you walked

Susannah said...

Hi be not blind,

Yes that is really true isn't it? and you put it so well!

"To turn things around and round til we see different aspects of life, different ways of explaining and expressing ourselves and our lives."

Well said!

It is really good to see you again, thanks for visiting. :-)

Carrie Burtt said...

I love every line...the flow and imagery is amazing Susannah! :-)

Susannah said...

Thanks Carrie. :-)

Good to see you.

chamiechamz said...

Love just simply reflect on your reflection. Nice to read this one. ;)

http://iamchamiechamz.blogspot.com/

Michaela said...

And again you created a very nice picture just with your words.

Michaela said...

This is so romantic, I love it!

Susannah said...

Thanks Micheala. x

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