I like the opening lines in this, Susannah, and how you've repeated the first stanza to end the poem. Lovely.
I love it, Susannah, and the repetition works well here.
Su,Great going. The concept of seed is awesome! I wrote something once..."An Appoopan Thadi Called Life"You will find it here: http://sites.google.com/site/worthonelifetime/home-page/Home/Poems/2010Just some more dope for insipiration :)
Thanks everyone for your comments, it is always good to hear from you. Rajesh, I read what you wrote and loved it, thanks for leaving the link. :-)Great to see you all. x
Susannah,A perfectly fitting poem, as spring arrives with us. Thoughts of new life!Best wishes, Eileen
Thanks Eileen. :-)
Love the rhythm and image it creates. Nicely done!
Thanks Yun Yi. :-)
Beautiful Susannah...I would like to nominate you for the versatile poet award..You can claim the award by going to http://poem-myworldofexcitement.blogspot.com/2011/03/versatile-blogger-award.html..With Regards,Rashmi
Thanks very much Rashmi, that is very kind of you. x
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