Saturday, 13 August 2011

Too Long In The Dark

Drench me with your summer love,
for I am not immune to darkness.

Smother me, until I radiate light
and pulse with all I have
left unspoken. . .

for I have been alone here,
and you are sunlight
knocking
at my
door.


21 comments:

Deborah said...

Absolutely beautiful.

Susannah said...

Thanks Deborah. :-) x

Lydia said...

A beautiful poem with a haiku feeling about it.

Happy Birthday!

Susannah said...

Thanks very much Lydia. (Good to meet you.) :-) x

Fireblossom said...

I know the feeling. Beautiful, Susannah.

Susannah said...

Thanks Shay. :-)

Rajesh said...

If only sunlight could hear, if only darkness had a voice!

Nice one Sue.

Susannah said...

Thanks Rajesh. :-)

Good to see you.

Kerry O'Connor said...

Oh what a poem, Susannah. Those last 5 lines are amazing.

Marian said...

oh, i can really feel this one.

California Ink in Motion said...

Very, very nice! Loved it. It touched me.

M.C. said...

Very lovely and well written.

Rashmi said...

Beautiful poem Susannah.........
Wishing you a very Very Wonderful Birthday..
Praying for your happiness and health...

Sheelonee Mukherjee said...

Glad to have read your blog.The words find a way out of the waves.. greetings. :)

Susannah said...

Thanks very much everyone, I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. :-)

Rashmi, thanks very much for the birthday greetings. :-)

Cletis L. Stump said...

Very much like a psalm by David and hotter than the Kama Sutra. You are a very sensual woman.

Susannah said...

Thanks Cletis. ;-)

It is good to see you. x

Martin (starwatcher521) said...

Like it very much : )

Susannah said...

Thanks very much Martin. :-)

Heaven said...

I thought you were going for a form, but the message is beauty in itself.

Happy birthday ~

Susannah said...

Thanks Heaven. :-)

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