tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post3541555381369795029..comments2023-06-29T14:40:16.307+01:00Comments on Out of my Ocean - Poetry: Not Lonely - Just AloneSusannahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-320482741840125722011-09-16T08:52:17.165+01:002011-09-16T08:52:17.165+01:00Thank you Kenia. :-) xThank you Kenia. :-) xSusannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-13996767925004853472011-09-16T03:46:55.633+01:002011-09-16T03:46:55.633+01:00Beautiful. You reminded me of Oscar Wilde at some ...Beautiful. You reminded me of Oscar Wilde at some point, though your poem is so sweet it makes me want to carry you, so tiny, in my cupped hands.<br /><br />Take care and keep smiling Susannah, and a kiss on your cheeks. <3Kenia Santoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12893148474912410033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-67749232659692012992011-08-12T10:54:19.022+01:002011-08-12T10:54:19.022+01:00Thanks very much SB, and thanks for visiting as it...Thanks very much SB, and thanks for visiting as it enabled me to find your blog too. I really enjoyed your Haikus, it is good to meet you. :-)Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-61382141355770156762011-08-12T02:47:33.477+01:002011-08-12T02:47:33.477+01:00This poem was fantastic, I read it a number of tim...This poem was fantastic, I read it a number of times before moving on to the next ones.<br /><br />It was very powerful, beautifully written, and incredibly honest.S.B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06535794256337984269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-15616769865375205212011-08-08T19:08:08.299+01:002011-08-08T19:08:08.299+01:00Thanks Paul, I hope that for you too. xThanks Paul, I hope that for you too. xSusannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-61382674870399312502011-08-08T18:54:46.047+01:002011-08-08T18:54:46.047+01:00Brandon thank you for your kind words and your opi...Brandon thank you for your kind words and your opinion. ;-) It is good to meet you, I hope you drop by again.Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-9265468356301338342011-08-08T12:03:20.605+01:002011-08-08T12:03:20.605+01:00I like this, Susannah, very powerful.
I sometime...I like this, Susannah, very powerful. <br /><br />I sometimes liken the inner person in me to the Count of Monte Cristo; without the need for revenge, of course. I hope one day to truly be free to be me. (Lived most of my life in fear - abusive father left his mark and I continue to mess up my life even though I should know better. He wins, mostly. Things however, do change.)Paul Andrew Russellhttp://www.paulandrewrussell.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-46040693543940692752011-08-07T14:04:14.270+01:002011-08-07T14:04:14.270+01:00Great poem, I like the inherent metaphor. I think ...Great poem, I like the inherent metaphor. I think the only thing holding it back is the punctuation, of which there is too much (commas in places that they shouldn't be). You're a damn fine poet, glad I came across this site.Brandonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12704525078859327898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-49459270095872681682011-08-04T10:59:09.970+01:002011-08-04T10:59:09.970+01:00Thanks everyone, I appreciate you reading and leav...Thanks everyone, I appreciate you reading and leaving a comment.<br /><br />Good to see you. xSusannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-58602404030355298322011-08-03T23:25:42.642+01:002011-08-03T23:25:42.642+01:00Watching them Swim, is so good
like reading the bi...Watching them Swim, is so good<br />like reading the birth of fear.<br /><br />Not Lonely, Just Alone, also has<br />an eerie quality...you're not<br />quite sure if you trust the<br />narrator.Cynthiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10256391836026637655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-11941377888000842222011-07-17T23:16:21.990+01:002011-07-17T23:16:21.990+01:00This resonates - the private interior person withi...This resonates - the private interior person within the exterior, visible one........very thought-provoking. Good one, Susannah!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-61295206806227682622011-07-17T19:57:49.211+01:002011-07-17T19:57:49.211+01:00Wow! I really like this. Incredible concept and so...Wow! I really like this. Incredible concept and so eloquently written. How often do we hide what we feel is the real portrait of ourselves behind the public face we would display?!PhotoDictionhttp://photodiction.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-55386742375809043362011-07-17T18:59:21.130+01:002011-07-17T18:59:21.130+01:00Honestly written with powerful implications. A goo...Honestly written with powerful implications. A good poem is worth reading an infinite number of times.Cynthiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01565221678344360046noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-76166806450509625972011-07-17T15:31:31.240+01:002011-07-17T15:31:31.240+01:00Susannah, this is powerful stuff. A bit chilling,...Susannah, this is powerful stuff. A bit chilling, jarring, but DEFINITELY a good read!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com