tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post5235141950331874284..comments2023-06-29T14:40:16.307+01:00Comments on Out of my Ocean - Poetry: Love or Something Like it . . .Susannahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-8016565664897499722011-10-09T12:44:07.314+01:002011-10-09T12:44:07.314+01:00Thanks so much stoic-wes, I really appreciate your...Thanks so much stoic-wes, I really appreciate your comment. <br /><br />Good to see you.Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-34523688063837649502011-10-09T12:18:31.377+01:002011-10-09T12:18:31.377+01:00So much to like and respect about your writing con...So much to like and respect about your writing consistently beautiful deep work..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-37084208660570742902011-09-15T08:34:25.256+01:002011-09-15T08:34:25.256+01:00:-) Thanks for dropping in Ed and for your comment...:-) Thanks for dropping in Ed and for your comment. It is good to see you here.Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-58532306451032872362011-09-14T20:44:53.948+01:002011-09-14T20:44:53.948+01:00strange beauty and wild shine in the eyes often ge...strange beauty and wild shine in the eyes often get me, too:)<br />there's a sense of taboo attraction and love here that draws me in quickly and fiercely. maybe because the character is a rebel tagger:)Ed Pilollahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09139531369534586168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-60916851931251293952011-09-10T09:32:25.199+01:002011-09-10T09:32:25.199+01:00Thanks so much Renee. :-) It is really good to se...Thanks so much Renee. :-) It is really good to see you again. xSusannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-33465784200162073972011-09-10T05:06:21.948+01:002011-09-10T05:06:21.948+01:00Beautiful words and beautifully written, Susannah....Beautiful words and beautifully written, Susannah. Haven't been here for awhile but never disappointed to find something wonderful when I come.Reneehttp://reneejustturtleflight.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-73577010847120821002011-09-09T21:11:59.142+01:002011-09-09T21:11:59.142+01:00Thanks very much Kim, it is always good to see you...Thanks very much Kim, it is always good to see you. xSusannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-6303629108948753372011-09-09T15:52:36.093+01:002011-09-09T15:52:36.093+01:00I felt the attraction between characters, the heat...I felt the attraction between characters, the heat and the details of surroundings. Nicely done, Susannah.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-79108545195131324762011-09-06T20:55:30.531+01:002011-09-06T20:55:30.531+01:00Good to see you Robb! I have missed seeing you ar...Good to see you Robb! I have missed seeing you around. :-)Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-43485059035083041452011-09-06T19:37:22.909+01:002011-09-06T19:37:22.909+01:00I have to say that although the poem was about lov...I have to say that although the poem was about love I had an image of a man who sells snake oil in my head. A stranger just pulled into town to sell you something possibly love.<br /><br />The too handsome stranger <br />has words that spin like plates, <br />and sparkle like screw top bottles, <br />all fizz and wasted glass. <br /><br />I can see a talk dark handsome man reaching out to take our money as we stare on. Thank you for the vision. As I always I love your way with words and need to visit more often.Robert Lloydhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09536151998025229196noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-59984984237457738122011-09-06T17:58:04.373+01:002011-09-06T17:58:04.373+01:00Tiaden, thank you very much. :-)Tiaden, thank you very much. :-)Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-50744977606621060242011-09-06T17:57:37.736+01:002011-09-06T17:57:37.736+01:00Cletis. :-)
Good to see you. xCletis. :-)<br /><br />Good to see you. xSusannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-31914334938157721242011-09-06T15:11:01.707+01:002011-09-06T15:11:01.707+01:00This is a beautifully crafted piece, I love the fl...This is a beautifully crafted piece, I love the flow of it and that endingAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-56720380561721887322011-09-06T14:18:46.946+01:002011-09-06T14:18:46.946+01:00Hey, how do you know so much about me?Hey, how do you know so much about me?Cletis https://www.blogger.com/profile/01865557276496148455noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-61470261023409531462011-09-01T09:50:39.778+01:002011-09-01T09:50:39.778+01:00Thanks andshewas, it is good to see you back. :-)x...Thanks andshewas, it is good to see you back. :-)xSusannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-72669762613098087032011-08-31T22:17:11.261+01:002011-08-31T22:17:11.261+01:00I adore this, especially the obscurity of the endi...I adore this, especially the obscurity of the ending. Amazing writing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-72947360542179569622011-08-30T17:12:44.272+01:002011-08-30T17:12:44.272+01:00Thanks MM, that's a real compliment. :-)
Good...Thanks MM, that's a real compliment. :-)<br /><br />Good to meet you.Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-41645319207436172382011-08-30T16:50:51.004+01:002011-08-30T16:50:51.004+01:00Agree with what Lorna said, the screw-top bottle p...Agree with what Lorna said, the screw-top bottle part is my favourite too, very Bob Dylanesque:)MMhttp://www.readingjuice.co.uk/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-60300601080669996182011-08-28T22:12:09.116+01:002011-08-28T22:12:09.116+01:00Thanks very much Rajesh. It is alwats good to see...Thanks very much Rajesh. It is alwats good to see you. :-)Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-9296062440467737082011-08-28T16:15:22.173+01:002011-08-28T16:15:22.173+01:00Sue,
The wind blows in a different direction in t...Sue,<br /><br />The wind blows in a different direction in this one :) From the vibrant greens of your earlier lines, these are so different in their greys.<br /><br />"She sweeps up the cold ash/ as it falls from his burnt out life." Almost out of a Shakespeare play.<br /><br />Beautiful and different.Rajeshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04899689846101356598noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-35275252580565392072011-08-24T19:22:14.066+01:002011-08-24T19:22:14.066+01:00Thanks very much Lorna. Good to see you. :-)Thanks very much Lorna. Good to see you. :-)Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-21213708726442483932011-08-24T18:45:24.096+01:002011-08-24T18:45:24.096+01:00Love the screw-top bottle part!!
Very, very good.
...Love the screw-top bottle part!!<br />Very, very good.<br />Lorna CahallLorna Cahallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12119513840378599480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-918094306964369092011-08-23T21:58:10.959+01:002011-08-23T21:58:10.959+01:00Good to see you here Amy and thanks for your kind ...Good to see you here Amy and thanks for your kind words. :-)<br /><br />I really enjoyed your response to this wordle and know what you mean about not reading other peoples first! I'd never post anything if I did. LOLSusannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-37672026163433875872011-08-23T20:58:20.976+01:002011-08-23T20:58:20.976+01:00Now THIS is a great take on the Wordle, and I'...Now THIS is a great take on the Wordle, and I'm glad I didn't see it before I wrote mine, because, like Viv always says, we are both rendered shy when we read a great response to a prompt. Loved this, and glad I thought to click on this blog on your header, Susannah. Peace, Amy (What's this fascination with strange men we share?!)<br />http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/08/22/the-big-change-poetic-bloomings/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com