tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post7949543501494024679..comments2023-06-29T14:40:16.307+01:00Comments on Out of my Ocean - Poetry: Trying not to moveSusannahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-92159553939604225122012-01-04T09:52:03.490+00:002012-01-04T09:52:03.490+00:00Cheers Paul. :-) It's good to see you here. x...Cheers Paul. :-) It's good to see you here. xSusannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-18903930096932298592012-01-03T20:23:52.918+00:002012-01-03T20:23:52.918+00:00This is very nice, Susannah. I love the imagery of...This is very nice, Susannah. I love the imagery of the shallow hollow. Misery is all too often bubbling away just below the surface of a person. One movement and it all comes spilling out. <br /><br />This is a lovely piece of writing. <br /><br />PaulPaul Andrew Russellhttp://www.paulandrewrussell.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-54090493462165674252012-01-03T17:23:21.152+00:002012-01-03T17:23:21.152+00:00Thanks very much OT. :-)
It is good to see you! A...Thanks very much OT. :-)<br /><br />It is good to see you! A very happy new year to you too.Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-26045891295146489202012-01-03T13:53:57.821+00:002012-01-03T13:53:57.821+00:00I thought I had reviewed this the other day, I mus...I thought I had reviewed this the other day, I must be going mad - anyways - I loved it - the tone - the imagery, phrasing, everything combines to give one hell of a poem - touching and powerful - I enjoyed this Susannah! happy new year :)Ostensible Truthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08775793995809226782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-11467529893379245622011-12-29T08:47:30.938+00:002011-12-29T08:47:30.938+00:00Thanks Brenda and Laurie. :-)
Good to see you bot...Thanks Brenda and Laurie. :-)<br /><br />Good to see you both. xSusannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-84214455050793644072011-12-28T20:11:10.484+00:002011-12-28T20:11:10.484+00:00The form is very effective here. I really enjoyed ...The form is very effective here. I really enjoyed this, Susannah.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-69275572962887334162011-12-28T17:46:32.091+00:002011-12-28T17:46:32.091+00:00This is lush wet sadness.This is lush wet sadness.brenda whttp://undercaws.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-24591942219964918872011-12-23T14:06:29.779+00:002011-12-23T14:06:29.779+00:00Thanks very much Mary. Good to see you. xThanks very much Mary. Good to see you. xSusannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-74792994130537145322011-12-23T13:47:25.042+00:002011-12-23T13:47:25.042+00:00Very moving poem, Susannah. (Just discovering thi...Very moving poem, Susannah. (Just discovering this one this morning)The strongest of images for me is the constant stillness being hard to bear. Sometimes one needs something, anything, to just break that stillness!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-20513445490775542882011-12-12T08:46:05.102+00:002011-12-12T08:46:05.102+00:00Thanks Susie. xThanks Susie. xSusannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-81977411222117091272011-12-12T07:03:24.540+00:002011-12-12T07:03:24.540+00:00The pain is so strong in this one...I found myself...The pain is so strong in this one...I found myself crying...it is sad but a beautiful poem...Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-88559685524574294142011-12-11T08:43:17.836+00:002011-12-11T08:43:17.836+00:00Good to see you Renee. xGood to see you Renee. xSusannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-72702170265794988432011-12-11T06:04:44.421+00:002011-12-11T06:04:44.421+00:00Beautifully written Susannah. I so like " a s...Beautifully written Susannah. I so like " a shallow hollow in which she kept her misery". Perhaps not but sadness in the words but emotions spilling over.Reneehttp://reneejustturtleflight.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-12005695115504613512011-12-10T20:01:52.116+00:002011-12-10T20:01:52.116+00:00Thanks very much. :-)
It is good to see you both....Thanks very much. :-)<br /><br />It is good to see you both. xSusannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-63942713879454805452011-12-10T17:36:18.549+00:002011-12-10T17:36:18.549+00:00A very touching poem. LOve and light to you : )A very touching poem. LOve and light to you : )Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17564210453026152076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-21062908942781059722011-12-10T17:04:12.779+00:002011-12-10T17:04:12.779+00:00the image of not being able to move without spilli...the image of not being able to move without spilling misery is so very heart-breaking and the last stanza makes me want to cry for her :( (I like how you wrote "down" veritcally - nice touch)Sheilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06541409754494611831noreply@blogger.com