tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post8432515356388071184..comments2023-06-29T14:40:16.307+01:00Comments on Out of my Ocean - Poetry: Processing - Composting - Growing.Susannahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-29117311407836595882011-07-26T18:42:45.234+01:002011-07-26T18:42:45.234+01:00You did such a beautiful job with the descriptions...You did such a beautiful job with the descriptions here.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-78674365592892962072011-07-26T15:10:19.189+01:002011-07-26T15:10:19.189+01:00Wow! That's a potent comparison. I loved the c...Wow! That's a potent comparison. I loved the chant-like effect the rhyme scheme added to the whole thing.<br />Stunning work.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-49436794097513247682010-09-27T16:03:01.912+01:002010-09-27T16:03:01.912+01:00Good to see you Carrie and thanks very much for yo...Good to see you Carrie and thanks very much for your comment. xSusannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-51987708812899458322010-09-27T14:13:44.648+01:002010-09-27T14:13:44.648+01:00I always hate it when i have an idea and I do not ...I always hate it when i have an idea and I do not immediately write it down....then later i am trying to remember it, and i cannot...it is lost. I love what you did with this poem...so much great vivid imagery...you have captured this process so eloquently unique. You are an amazing poet Susannah! :-_)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-26972204509962436342010-09-27T07:50:09.137+01:002010-09-27T07:50:09.137+01:00Thanks Jingle and Diane for taking the time to rea...Thanks Jingle and Diane for taking the time to read, much appreciated. :-)Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-63925109606693136242010-09-27T01:36:43.418+01:002010-09-27T01:36:43.418+01:00Boy do I know what this is like. I lost my voice ...Boy do I know what this is like. I lost my voice a short time ago and am now taking speech therapy. Of course this may not be what happened to you... you may have swallowed that snake!Diane Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15886778060199433214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-82779084348128279572010-09-27T01:05:57.105+01:002010-09-27T01:05:57.105+01:00your imagination is very sharp or vivid,
wow,
thos...your imagination is very sharp or vivid,<br />wow,<br />those in the first few lines, really give me shivers, stunning poem!Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-42448623763309479782010-09-26T21:13:11.437+01:002010-09-26T21:13:11.437+01:00Hi umamaheswari and thanks very much for visiting,...Hi umamaheswari and thanks very much for visiting, it is nice to meet you. :-)<br /><br />...and yes, what a digestion! lolSusannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-71299530634353431602010-09-26T20:11:32.144+01:002010-09-26T20:11:32.144+01:00I loved the poem.With the order displayed and the ...I loved the poem.With the order displayed and the ryming ends....what a digestion? :)Uma Anandanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11529447615364043190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-85862226488405405172010-04-02T00:01:45.908+01:002010-04-02T00:01:45.908+01:00Thanks Be-Not :-) - when I read your poem it made ...Thanks Be-Not :-) - when I read your poem it made me think of this one - same feeling, different expression.Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-16126533474501810362010-04-01T23:13:21.949+01:002010-04-01T23:13:21.949+01:00I wish I wrote this! :) This is one of my favorite...I wish I wrote this! :) This is one of my favorites (so far). It's refreshing to read something with FEELING, not just the same old stuff out there today. And once again, these are a couple of parts that pleased my ears:<br /><br />...over my ammunition<br />...in this war of attrition<br /><br />AND<br /><br />to bear its venom into battlebe not blindhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17043866721643908236noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-4342216339757089852010-01-09T23:45:09.133+00:002010-01-09T23:45:09.133+00:00Hi Isha, thanks very much for your comment, it is ...Hi Isha, thanks very much for your comment, it is much appreciated. <br /><br />Nice to meet you. :-)Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-5549196566182701452010-01-09T22:49:16.732+00:002010-01-09T22:49:16.732+00:00Im glad to have stumbled upon this blog. It is jus...Im glad to have stumbled upon this blog. It is just lovely =]<br /><br />Ill definitely be visiting often! <br />thanks for sharing. <br /><br />-Isha EtheraIsha Etherahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13078149456154457103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-4382381197424165462010-01-08T18:12:27.883+00:002010-01-08T18:12:27.883+00:00Thanks very much Marinela, thanks for visiting and...Thanks very much Marinela, thanks for visiting and for your comment.Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8588401421725359772.post-11643490187863727132010-01-08T17:40:02.250+00:002010-01-08T17:40:02.250+00:00Nice thoughts expressed in this verses
:)Nice thoughts expressed in this verses<br />:)Marinelahttp://marinelareka.com/noreply@blogger.com