Graffiti stained granite,
daubed with the markings of life.
Incendiary slogans shout for freedom,
there's a revolution in the making.
The too handsome stranger
has words that spin like plates,
and sparkle like screw top bottles,
all fizz and wasted glass.
Straight backed, he will not slouch,
though fervant desperation
spills from the cracked
cheap vessel of him.
She sweeps up the cold ash
as it falls from his burnt out life.
Cleansed of all her preconceptions,
she is taken by his strange beauty,
enchanted by the wild shine of his eyes,
and the way that the afternoon light
falls gently around his shoulders,
like a cloak.
written for this prompt
Tuesday, 23 August 2011
Sunday, 21 August 2011
to fill a space . . .
THE GRASS IS GREENER
ON THE OTHER SIDE
ON THE OTHER SIDE
He meticulously bought the cigarette paper up to his lips
with deft and artful tongue he licked the exposed edge.
Flicking at the lighter until the flame leapt
. . . he inhaled . . .
eyes tight closed
as he took that ritual long slow breath.
Pulling the sacred smoke down
deep into his lungs.
Silence fell as he held it there.
Moments passed - like shooting stars.
. . . until he exhaled clouds . . .
Sweetly scented blue grey smoke
curling and climbing the expectant air.
He smiled as peace descended.
He was home.
with deft and artful tongue he licked the exposed edge.
Flicking at the lighter until the flame leapt
. . . he inhaled . . .
eyes tight closed
as he took that ritual long slow breath.
Pulling the sacred smoke down
deep into his lungs.
Silence fell as he held it there.
Moments passed - like shooting stars.
. . . until he exhaled clouds . . .
Sweetly scented blue grey smoke
curling and climbing the expectant air.
He smiled as peace descended.
He was home.
GIRL IN EXILE
Sidestepping the arid thoughts
of these, her every day torments,
she swept the kitchen.
Blue broom pushing yesterdays crumbs
over her threshold, and out onto
the cold cement of another day.
The egg yellow sun crawling
over bland suburban rooftops,
scars her morning with its slanted light.
Its luke warm fingers roaming
her upturned face, exploring the weight
of her world on her shoulders, her slow walk
tender footfalls on unforgiving concrete.
In her head she sees the grasses of a distant plain,
and hears the plaintive notes that have become
her internal soundtrack. Playing on repeat,
looping over and over. An accompaniment
to her search for those rusty keys,
and lost prophets,
of home.
I have another blog where I post things written in response to prompts given by the many sites out there that are helping to keep the muse alive and well. They are good fun and help to create pieces outside of my usual style and subject matter. Occasionally if I really like something, (or as in this case haven't written anything un-prompt related for a while!) I will move writing from there to here. This is one of those times! Here are two 'prompted' pieces. Please forgive me if you have already read them and please pop back again soon for some new un-prompted words. - Susannah ;-)
Sidestepping the arid thoughts
of these, her every day torments,
she swept the kitchen.
Blue broom pushing yesterdays crumbs
over her threshold, and out onto
the cold cement of another day.
The egg yellow sun crawling
over bland suburban rooftops,
scars her morning with its slanted light.
Its luke warm fingers roaming
her upturned face, exploring the weight
of her world on her shoulders, her slow walk
tender footfalls on unforgiving concrete.
In her head she sees the grasses of a distant plain,
and hears the plaintive notes that have become
her internal soundtrack. Playing on repeat,
looping over and over. An accompaniment
to her search for those rusty keys,
and lost prophets,
of home.
I have another blog where I post things written in response to prompts given by the many sites out there that are helping to keep the muse alive and well. They are good fun and help to create pieces outside of my usual style and subject matter. Occasionally if I really like something, (or as in this case haven't written anything un-prompt related for a while!) I will move writing from there to here. This is one of those times! Here are two 'prompted' pieces. Please forgive me if you have already read them and please pop back again soon for some new un-prompted words. - Susannah ;-)
Saturday, 13 August 2011
Too Long In The Dark
Drench me with your summer love,
for I am not immune to darkness.
Smother me, until I radiate light
and pulse with all I have
left unspoken. . .
for I have been alone here,
and you are sunlight
knocking
at my
door.
for I am not immune to darkness.
Smother me, until I radiate light
and pulse with all I have
left unspoken. . .
for I have been alone here,
and you are sunlight
knocking
at my
door.
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