*
There are moments
where I feel that I have
tapped into something bigger
something more than just
my personal feelings
As though
at the bottom of my own emotions
exists a door
I swim right down to the bottom of my psyche
down into the universal ocean of emotion
that is surging beneath.
Everything ever felt
exists here
and it pours through me
I am its conduit
aware and
empty
I feel
it all
I thrash my way to the surface
up away from that huge
encompassing ocean
breathless and overwhelmed
I emerge to float upon the surface
staring up with gratitude
at the light
above
- Susannah Bec 2010
There are moments
where I feel that I have
tapped into something bigger
something more than just
my personal feelings
As though
at the bottom of my own emotions
exists a door
I swim right down to the bottom of my psyche
down into the universal ocean of emotion
that is surging beneath.
Everything ever felt
exists here
and it pours through me
I am its conduit
aware and
empty
I feel
it all
I thrash my way to the surface
up away from that huge
encompassing ocean
breathless and overwhelmed
I emerge to float upon the surface
staring up with gratitude
at the light
above
*
- Susannah Bec 2010
9 comments:
...into the universal ocean of emotion..
I love that rhythm! I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. You've got a lot!
-I've got bunches more than what's on my blog, I'm trying to add one a day from my notebook. :)
-Keep it up.
Thanks :-)
I very much enjoy the rhythm of words too.
Thanks for dropping in and for your comment, it is much appreciated.
You have encapsulated in words emotions that I have felt.....Kudos to you.
Thanks very much for your comment Charles, it is much appreciated. I am glad you have felt it too. Nice to meet you. :-)
Know what you mean.Sometimes I feel I have more than I could handle.So much feelings yet unable to handle them the way I want to.Great Poem.
Your words create images.
Almost like a filmlet.
Just wonderful to "watch"
Thanks Michaela, I love your observation, thank you. :-)
Hi Susannah,
Sometimes we do get those overwhelming feelings, don't we, or belonging to something so much greater than ourselves and yet, is part of us.
And often we don't know what to do about those experiences, how to channel and manifest them in our everyday that promote positive change in ourselves and others. Cheers!
Thanks very much for dropping in and for your comment - it is good to see you here. :-)
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