I leave the pale blue buckets filled with fear
lined up outside my bedroom door.
When they are full right up to the brim
I grab the thin metal handles
and carry them ever so slowly
with tiny shuffling fairy steps
sloshing and dripping
through the kitchen, down the stairs
all the way out into the garden
where I empty them carefully onto the Roses
lined up outside my bedroom door.
When they are full right up to the brim
I grab the thin metal handles
and carry them ever so slowly
with tiny shuffling fairy steps
sloshing and dripping
through the kitchen, down the stairs
all the way out into the garden
where I empty them carefully onto the Roses
- Susannah Bec 2010
18 comments:
Such a lovely poem. Tears in so many ways neurish us, why not the flowers aswell. Love it. :-)
I really like the concept of fear being turned into something beautiful.
Interesting,Pale Blue Buckets, I like the Pale Blue expression
Thanks very much for the comments, they are much appreciated. :-)
Wow! This paints such a vivid picture! Great as always.
Thanks be not :-)
It is always good to see you here.
I really like the travel you make with the buckets down the stairs and through the house. Its as if you are showing that the trip is worth it no matter the pain to get there. Another wonderful poem Susannah!! I always look forward to your writing.
Thanks Robb, I really appreciate the feedback - good to see you. :-)
Thanks for visiting my blog, Susannah. I appreciate your comments and your reading.
I like your sun post (two down) a lot.
Hi cosmoscami and thanks very much for your comment - I hope you will visit again. Nice to meet you. :-)
This is emotional recycling! ;)
I loved this poem. I feel like it could be applied to life. Everyone should read it, just once.
Hi Alexis - I love your "emotional recycling" observation - brilliant! :-)
Thanks very much for your comment it is much appreciated, great to see you here. x
In your words there is a noticeable hesitancy. Despite gentle words so much weight in the content.
I wish you a warm and sunny day :-)
Thanks Micheala. :-)
It is always good to see you - I hope all is well in your world. x
gosh! how do you manage to write something like this! i loved the idea that fear could be dumped in the buckets and just carried out of oneself ... out where it can become fertilizer to something beautiful... lovely, Susannah... really lovely!
Thank you so much Maya, I really appreciate your comment. :-)
It is great to see you here too!
GLORIOUS. I love it.
Thanks Sherry. :-)
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