It was the kind of occasion
that called for handshakes.
The smile you pasted upon
your perfectly powdered,
rouged and lipsticked face,
made me blink in disbelief.
Why would you pretend?
When your soul was melting
and dripping through the gaps
in your tightly woven fingers.
Some things are best left unsaid,
but not this, no, please, not this.
Petals, perfume, claustrophobia,
no space, the elephant in the room
is using up all of the oxygen.
Polite chatter covers the fissures
opening up in the solid ground
beneath our slick stilettoed heels.
You just make it to the exit door,
moments before your slipping mask
says everything that you won't.
I have transferred this over from my Panopticulated blog.
It was written using the prompt words - Blink, Kind, Occasion.
Shared with The Poetry Pantry
8 comments:
Maybe these formalities are important...having something that seems normal, if forced, when things are not normal.
Wow, this is a powerful write, Susannah. I love the question "why would you pretend when your soul is melting?" Terrific! Isnt this so often the case, the cheery superficialities, while the truth sits like an elephant we step around? Wonderful write!
Oh, Susanah, I know about elephants in the room....and polite chatter. This is a strong poem with a lot of depth.
A beautifully written poem that speaks worlds. The celebratory occasion, the elephant in the room, the called-for facade barely kept together - you've made it all so real... and heartbreakingly sad.
Ah! I can totally relate to this poem. The elephant in the room is the stiffness that comes with stupid rules of manners and standards set by society. After all, what is the point of going to a social do when you're wrapped up in your discomfort.
You totally captured it. I loved this poem.
I like this slipping mask...hard to someone you are not at special events...on ocasion...I like to stay home...bkm
Thanks everyone, I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. :-)
Good to see you all
Susannah x
Powerful poem! I love <> I know that feeling!
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