Sunday, 20 February 2011

Found

It was just laying there
down amongst the grass
and the unblown dandelions.

Just the smallest glint of light,
catching hold of the sunshine and
reflecting it up into my downcast eyes.
.
.
.
If the sun
really wants to find you,
it will find a way.

9 comments:

Kratik said...

Great poem, I am speechless. good good :) keep writing
Very well written.
you know, when I read the title "Found" I thought it must be another of those clich├ęd poems but no it wasn't. In fact, it was so brilliant that I even decided to comment. Well done.
Also, read my poem:
http://kratik1987.blogspot.com/2011/02/just-me.html
Cheers :)
Kratik

Elizabeth said...

Love this and the hope it rings for all to hear. Thank you,

Elizabeth

Rajesh said...

Su,

This is so beautiful. If the sun really wants to find you... it will. Wonderful.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

I love this, the reflection of light into downcast eyes. Just beautiful!

turtlememoir said...

Oh, I love this, have experienced it too. The final lines are beautiful, warming and s-o-o-o memorable. Thank you.

Susannah said...

Thanks everyone, I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. :-)

Good to see you all
Susannah x

Deborah said...

Wonderful ...just wonderful!

Kenia Cris said...

Beautiful, Susannah. The sun will really find us, reason why we should never lose hope. =)

Kiss you dear. =*

Judy Roney said...

Beautiful. The ending was a nice surprise. I like "unblown dandelions". My imagination is running wild wondering what was found. :0)

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