It was just laying there down amongst the grass and the unblown dandelions.
Just the smallest glint of light, catching hold of the sunshine and reflecting it up into my downcast eyes. . . . If the sun really wants to find you, it will find a way.
Great poem, I am speechless. good good :) keep writing Very well written. you know, when I read the title "Found" I thought it must be another of those clichéd poems but no it wasn't. In fact, it was so brilliant that I even decided to comment. Well done. Also, read my poem: http://kratik1987.blogspot.com/2011/02/just-me.html Cheers :) Kratik
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Great poem, I am speechless. good good :) keep writing
Very well written.
you know, when I read the title "Found" I thought it must be another of those clichéd poems but no it wasn't. In fact, it was so brilliant that I even decided to comment. Well done.
Also, read my poem:
http://kratik1987.blogspot.com/2011/02/just-me.html
Cheers :)
Kratik
Love this and the hope it rings for all to hear. Thank you,
Elizabeth
Su,
This is so beautiful. If the sun really wants to find you... it will. Wonderful.
I love this, the reflection of light into downcast eyes. Just beautiful!
Oh, I love this, have experienced it too. The final lines are beautiful, warming and s-o-o-o memorable. Thank you.
Thanks everyone, I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. :-)
Good to see you all
Susannah x
Wonderful ...just wonderful!
Beautiful, Susannah. The sun will really find us, reason why we should never lose hope. =)
Kiss you dear. =*
Beautiful. The ending was a nice surprise. I like "unblown dandelions". My imagination is running wild wondering what was found. :0)
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