Those silvered reflections of you
still exist, strands of spidered silk
woven and so delicately knotted
tracing my veins, footpaths edged
beside the crimson rivers, blood
bound and fluid, still guided
by the high wire touch of you
imperceptable tightropes
where once you walked
- Susannah Bec 2010
still exist, strands of spidered silk
woven and so delicately knotted
tracing my veins, footpaths edged
beside the crimson rivers, blood
bound and fluid, still guided
by the high wire touch of you
imperceptable tightropes
where once you walked
- Susannah Bec 2010
18 comments:
i enjoy reading your beautifully written words. this one made me think of a lover and those thoughts are always sweet. i look forward to reading more.
-inspiredleo :) http://inspiredleo.blogspot.com
Hi leo, thanks for your kind words. It is good to see you again. :-)
This imagery is vivid, i like that this all fits together perfectly. Well done Susannah.
So beautiful, Susannah! the "spidered silk", "the high wire touch of you".....the remembrance, and beauty and romance......just lovely.
Thanks Ladan. :-)
Sherry, thanks very much. :-)
Good to see you.
"the high wore touch of you"
oh yeah.
Good ro see you Fireblossom. :-)
This piece reminds me of the song "memories" by Barbara Streisand. Like reminiscing about a great love.
Thanks for dropping in Charles, it's good to see you. :-)
Wow, really great! The whole perspective of it is amazing. That's kind of what we aim to do isn't it? -To turn things around and round til we see different aspects of life, different ways of explaining and expressing ourselves and our lives. I especially liked:
..by the high wire touch of you
imperceptable tightropes
where once you walked
Hi be not blind,
Yes that is really true isn't it? and you put it so well!
"To turn things around and round til we see different aspects of life, different ways of explaining and expressing ourselves and our lives."
Well said!
It is really good to see you again, thanks for visiting. :-)
I love every line...the flow and imagery is amazing Susannah! :-)
Thanks Carrie. :-)
Good to see you.
Love just simply reflect on your reflection. Nice to read this one. ;)
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And again you created a very nice picture just with your words.
This is so romantic, I love it!
Thanks Micheala. x
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